More Makuyama

After I did the Makuyama drawing I wanted to make it seem like it was on paper when I post it here then color it later on to post on my art galleries. However the paper look is stylish and I was wondering if you guys think I should post it as is or color it as well then post it.

Final product: (above image)
deviant Art
Fur Affinity

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Lardo crater

This is a failed attempt at Lardo's crater.  The idea is a low view shot of Lardo walking away from a crater he created with his butt drop.  The idea rocks in my head but I need to draw it well before I color it.  I'm scraping the above pic.

Tara the Lioness with Hips.

Tara is © Paper 2 Clip "P2C"

I need to get this commission done for this client since he's so nice and patient and became a friend of mine quickly after meeting him. So I doodled his thick-thighed Lioness today at work. I like all of the results so then I asked him which one he would want me to color. He chose #1 so I'll try to ink that on the way to work tomorrow and color it there.

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Sorry for typo earlier I meant Paper is very nice and patient.




Currently on the ink stage moving on to colors.

Papes, Aroma, and Jiggly / Jessica Hippo

First image is an attempt at my surprise commission for Paper 2 Clip. He pretty much just wants a pic of him and any girl since he has faith that I'll do a great pic regardless. I appreciate his trust in me but I really wish I knew what I should aim for. I've gotten feedback on the first image saying its good but I don't like it so I don't know if I should finish it for him or try something else.

Second image was done quickly for Arkeveen last night to cheer him up. Devicat was feeling ill during his stream and had to cancel it prematurely and that upset Ark because he made a request. Ark seems to have liked it but he critiqued it a little too much considering it was a free pic. So I feel kinda cheated since I spent time drawing it. I do like the pic however and probably would of colored it before. Now I'm thinking not so much.

In case you don't know its cool to critique artist work, its not however recommend to do it to an artist that does free pics for you. It kinda kills motivation to ever repeat doing a pic.